Draca851
12-18-2010, 07:57 PM
Hey there Everyone! Draca851 here! i am here to see what people think about my amvs that i personalty have made! so if u guys could check them out and post what u think on this thread that will be great!


www.youtube.com/user/Draca851

CelticFoxx
12-19-2010, 02:12 AM
You have potential, but there a few things about your AMVs that do not really go together.
I. you could crop out the subs or get a better source
II. there is no rhythm through out each of them, they just seem to be random based upon various scenes that are 5-30 seconds long. though some of them fit the song they could have been arranged better.
those are the two major reasons. there are others but they fall in sub categories to those two. Keep in mind that when making an AMV quality is great but it also needs to flow.
I. you could try to match up with the musics rhythm
II. place images/ scenes in appropriate spots to the musics vocals
III. take some time to plot out these things.

you could make an AMV of yours from being criticized to being admired.
examples of things you could do:
Something mediocre and simple, made by me... out of shear boredom. I basically took the whole fight scene from end of eva, cropped out the extras and told the story of it from start to end whiles editing it to fit the appropriate music. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MMhks-nCKg4)
This one is just funny but they kept to the lyrics. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ST8qaF88C0s)
NOSTROMO, do i need to say more, he keeps with great visuals and dose a great deal of editing to keep with the song and also make a story. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HxycfmmI9h0)

there is also this thing i did because of various reasons concerning at the time i wanted to make something but i had no ideas and i was watching AMV hell CE. upon seeing how much they made fun of Asuka fighting the white robots i wanted to know if there were any AMV's out there, to my amazement only one and it was not anything special.
In this amv, the person had really bad audio, the picture quality was not to scale and worse of all they never did any real editing to it, just did a 2 minute job of taking a whole scene and saying fine work (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9L5uBHLDaSA)
with knowing that i took my opportunity and made in my option to their video, a better version and submitted it to Anime Bonzai 2010. i got disqualified because of the bumper though :/ (http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xf4yo4_they-dont-believe-me-animebanzai201_creation)
though i don't have as many views and i have never been successful with that, but with this music video on youtube, they took the sound off thus limiting people to stay to watch :/

Evileel
12-19-2010, 07:46 AM
^^ As he said.
Btw, Zarxrax should give Celticfoxx the title of Mini Reviewer ^_^