Hows this?

[Gentle Dementia]

I'm a big fan of AMV Hell, and I had this idea a bit ago, the main problem was just getting the sound clip (was a bastard to find). Actual editing was a snap, I estimated where the soundclip should be and luckily enough ended up not having to move it after that.

http://www.mirrorcreator.com/files/0BUYTHHM/The_Girl_Who_Leapt_Through_The_Choo_Choo.wmv_links

I feel it could be improved, any suggestions?

Edit: After receiving some good advice, (overused clip and too long), I remade it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yKX-1psysEA
I like this one a lot better.

[mattroks101]

Pretty well done.

[Scorchedenigma]

LOL XD i like it, i cant think of anything that would really make it better

[animemental1]

Heh, you should try submitting that.

[mattroks101]

^ Too late. He stopped taking them. :(

[Chewi105]

Heh, you should try submitting that.
yus. if you dont. i will find you. and hand you over to animemental >:3

btw, what was the audio from

[Gentle Dementia]

Thanks for all the feedback, I know what you mean enigma, I know it could be better, but without any glaring mistakes I don't really know what to change.
Btw, The Audio is from "Hardtack Montana: Eppysode 2"
It's a machinima series, actually pretty funny, only episode one is on youtube, so you're better off trying to google it.

[Chewi105]

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lbk89xdJWf1qdgdb4o1_500.jpg

[Gentle Dementia]

http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lh71y4lJM11qhxc3po1_500.jpg

[mattroks101]

Lol.

[Rotkeps Aniger]

The clip is fine.

[Gentle Dementia]

The clip is fine.

Which one?

[mattroks101]

Both, they're both great. :D

[Gentle Dementia]

There, happy chewi?

[Guthix]

ive seen this some time ago but it still bring up a smile