[Sneffe]

Hello everyone
This is one of my first amv I'd be happy if you would watch and tell me what you think about. Remember that this is one of my first amv and I'm still not used to the software I'm using... but you can still give me a little hint in the right direction if I did something wrong.
Well here it is

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Y5CDMwbwCU&lc=Q_816IYUlKZsUM1JRFRs54DYQ-wLAD2yArJ8aUM2bL4&feature=inbox

[N.P.C.C.]

First mistake...Linkin Park....Ok to be serious, using music from them in a amv has become a parody of itself and i can't recommend doing that ever again. Not unless you want it to possibly be taken as unintentional comedy.

- With that said, it's overall decent.

- If you're going to lip synch commit at all times with the exception of shots purely for emphasis/story telling. Avoid doing stuff like at 2: 47 where you let the lips of the character trial off after synching some of it. The trick is balancing when and when not to do it and let the footage tell the story you are trying to tell.

- Uh oh...I was about to marathon this series but i feel i should hold off for a month to forget some of what i saw...

[Sneffe]

Thank you
I'll definitely take what you said into consideration once I start up on my next amv :)

[N.P.C.C.]

No problem

One other thing..I can't stress enough how important it is to conceive something of a story (even if it's convoluted/contradicting) with the editing. It may not look like it, but keep editing to try to tell a story. Like at the "Walking in your shoes" part. It's good you get this concept earlier as it's the small things.

[Guthix]

besides the likking park hating
my 2 cents
the vissuals were completely off sync of the music, nor did the lyrics connect in any matter
lip sync needs work
the special affects didnt empathize anything, looked more like trying to hide something with random flashes
in the end the smile could have gone without the voiceless mouth flap
you get a + for quality