Marbil
11-09-2012, 06:20 PM
Yo! Here is a late amv for Halloween that I have made. This is the fifth amv I have made so far and it took me about a week to get it finished. So now I wonder what you think, Was it good/bad? What was good/what was less good? I am relatively new to amv: S so criticism are welcome to help me improve!^^ Well, enjoy!:)


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3RuGYMGT00k

Anime: Shiki
Song: Walking dead
artist: Papa Roach
Guthix
11-09-2012, 06:24 PM
oh my~
that is very well done, ill be honest after watching it whole only once i have no critisism
Haar
11-09-2012, 06:46 PM
I liked it. Didn't see anything particularly technically wrong with it that I can't just blame on YouTube being silly with bit rates, unlike a large amount of people that post AMVs here. Thought the song was a little repetitive, but that's just me nitpicking.

So, do you have a download link anywhere? I grabbed the YouTube version regardless, but I'd like to see the original file, if possible.
Ginger126
11-09-2012, 07:01 PM
Wait, Haar giving little to no criticism? Where am I and what year is it? lol on another note, though not a great judge of AMVs by any means, I agree it was very well done and thoroughly enjoyable. Makes me want to check out that anime :D
N.P.C.C.
11-09-2012, 07:06 PM
I really liked it. Nice, smooth, and polished out editing all around and to the beat at all times. I liked how you committed to that fast cut at the start of the chorus. Last, this is one of the few times where i see artificial effects implemented in a way that wasn't jarring at all.
Haar
11-09-2012, 07:14 PM
Wait, Haar giving little to no criticism? Where am I and what year is it?
You're on a site full of people that can't follow rules and it's the year where someone actually took the time to do things correctly, for once. Not entirely sure what year on the AMV Zodiac that is, though.
Marbil
11-09-2012, 07:37 PM
Im really glad you guys liked it. Believe it or not, but that means alot!^^

So, do you have a download link anywhere? I grabbed the YouTube version regardless, but I'd like to see the original file, if possible.
Download link will be up soon:P
ThatsNotMyName_studio
11-10-2012, 02:41 AM
In addition to what Haar said, and (didn't anyone else notice a nod of somewhat) approval from Guthix as well.

If I had any visual comment, I would say maybe some blended transitions.

What struck me the most was that, although I haven't seen your anime source, I was able to follow along quite nicely.
Superb storytelling, IMO.

Well done!