[jeremyhac]

2 Weeks off from school, thought I'd finish this finally.

http://youtu.be/IIKlmtcQ0OI

[N.P.C.C.]

I thought it was all right overall. Nothing particularity wrong about it minus lip synching being a tad off. That said, nothing really stood out. I'd criticize the song choice, but being familiar with the anime and hearing the lyrics to "the enemy" for the first time in awhile makes me realize why you made the choice you did.

- I don't feel enough is given to follow a coherent story with the editing here. I was thinking one too many characters kept substituting the role of "The enemy" but i guess i understand if that was your intent. I'm a story guy so i like seeing a story told with editing so that's just me.

- That "checkmate" part was pure money to me. Replayed that a few times.

- Did you use both season 1 and R2 to do this? Seems like only the former.

- I like the parts that was following the lyrics but i can't help but feel it got abandoned a couple of times and came back to later in the video. Again, i always watch for a story i can follow through the editing.