[Multi]

hey all ..!
this this my Amv ive created .. what do you think guys ?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yny1d3KXFT4

[Sir Fluffykins]

First: Arabic subtitles, tv logos, fan-subber embedded logos. = bad

The scenes never get near as "epic" as the music and when it finally looks like soemthing is happening it cuts to the credits which are far better edited than the actual AMV.

Also, whole thread for "Hey all, pls look at my amv I created" I'm starting to think these are made by bots, because the comments are so similar to each other

[proserpine]

This is a horrible miss-use of the word ''epic''.

[N.P.C.C.]

http://i1186.photobucket.com/albums/z372/NintendoPorn/SpongebobSquarepantsSUBTITLESChocolateParodyLarge. gif

I'm sorry but ANY effort this amv had put into it was pissed on just because you let those stupid ass subs shown/in. Some parts were generally interesting/competent but that causes me to now contemplate how much of that was you and how much of that was the actual show footage.

[PrinnyCat]

Well I'm not sure if there was effects in there or if all the random zooms in and out were just efforts to try and remove the subtitles. Honestly, not the worst I've seen, but still, it ain't that 'epic'

[Thetruecrow]

Too long, didn't finish. It's **** m8, and I would know.

[Guthix]

...
well im late

[ThatsNotMyName_studio]

sorry,
naruto = not gonna watch it.

[jinzo64]

not epic at all,
Tis the type of sub par tripe that I tend to churn out.

the video seemed jerky and some scenes were placed and it was abit jumpy at times.

but as they say practice makes better.

[Multi]

well i get it the subtites turn the amv into sh**
its not epic at all !
at least give me constructive criticism , advices , your amv's to to learn some moves
and yes , please take considration that this is my first Amv ever !

any way thanx all for your comment !

[Haar]

at least give me constructive criticism , advices , your amv's to to learn some moves
1. Become 18 years old at a bare minimum
2. Read this http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/avtech31/ and this http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/kalium/index.html
3 Watch AMV Hell 6.66. That being said, I don't think you can really "learn" moves just from watching an amv, but I'll put this here anyway. (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/nseeqe3srgcbki6/Style.mp4?dl=1&token_hash=AAFOTqZPa8FWafiRcLTwL5FkfNvgP-EghhGpfylKcZIs-Q)

[jinzo64]

well i get it the subtites turn the amv into sh**
its not epic at all !
at least give me constructive criticism , advices , your amv's to to learn some moves
and yes , please take considration that this is my first Amv ever !

any way thanx all for your comment !

Actual constructive advice

erm
try to avoid video footage that contains subtitles it can be distracting

try not to over sell your video by using the word epic or amazing

do not expect people to like your first attempt at amv making, this hobby takes years of practice.

the video needed to be more fluid you also need look at it again there are parts that just Don't go together all that well and make the video look jumpy.

also theres some kind of shake effect that wasn't needed.

it probably didn't need alot of the transition effects either.

another thing to note is that between 1.05 and 1.27 the video becomes slightly muddled with use of the same clip being used at different times it makes look abit random.

it's a nice effort for your first video,I hope you stick with it. the only way is up.

p.s your new to amvhell alot of the members are high strung A** Holes, who wouldn't know constructive criticism if it was tied to a brick and smacked in to there faces.

[Shuiia]

p.s your new to amvhell alot of the members are high strung A** Holes, who wouldn't know constructive criticism if it was tied to a brick and smacked in to there faces.

I sometimes wonder if you get anything at all Jinzo...

[N.P.C.C.]

p.s your new to amvhell alot of the members are high strung A** Holes, who wouldn't know constructive criticism if it was tied to a brick and smacked in to there faces.


http://i1186.photobucket.com/albums/z372/NintendoPorn/JemNiggaIsOutrageousGif.gif

[Haar]

p.s your new to amvhell alot of the members are high strung A** Holes, who wouldn't know constructive criticism if it was tied to a brick and smacked in to there faces.

I have the amazing ability to instantly judge the character of new posters and measure their potential. But I usually post a copypasta info dump of links for everyone anyway.

[SuperLoliSentai]

I have the amazing ability to instantly judge the character of new posters and measure their potential. But I usually post a copypasta info dump of links for everyone anyway.
I call bull****, on the first part that is!

[Haar]

I call bull****, on the first part that is!

I initially disliked you and thought you were a bad person, didn't I?

[SuperLoliSentai]

I initially disliked you and thought you were a bad person, didn't I?

But... but... but you love me now.

[jinzo64]

I sometimes wonder if you get anything at all Jinzo...

I get lots of things

like I recently got a cold thats not going any where fast :(

http://i1186.photobucket.com/albums/z372/NintendoPorn/JemNiggaIsOutrageousGif.gif
http://1-media-cdn.foolz.us/ffuuka/board/a/image/1335/66/1335662412514.jpg


I have the amazing ability to instantly judge the character of new posters and measure their potential. But I usually post a copypasta info dump of links for everyone anyway.
True Dat


I call bull****, on the first part that is!

oh, but it's true Haar said it, so it must be true.


I initially disliked you and thought you were a bad person, didn't I?
don't you do that with everyone?


But... but... but you love me now.
even if he doesn't love you I always will :3

[ThatsNotMyName_studio]

Smells like derailed thread in here =)

[Shuiia]

Smells like derailed thread in here =)

>2014
>expecting a thread anywhere to remain on topic

especially when it's narutardnewfag #2432427593 showing off his SO DEEP AND EPIC LIKE MY SOUL AMV

[milleniummaster18]

Wouldn't have it any other way.

[Multi]

3 Watch AMV Hell 6.66. That being said, I don't think you can really "learn" moves just from watching an amv, but I'll put this here anyway.
Yeah i can :D , thanx anyway


Actual constructive advice

erm
try to avoid video footage that contains subtitles it can be distracting

try not to over sell your video by using the word epic or amazing

do not expect people to like your first attempt at amv making, this hobby takes years of practice.

the video needed to be more fluid you also need look at it again there are parts that just Don't go together all that well and make the video look jumpy.

also theres some kind of shake effect that wasn't needed.

it probably didn't need alot of the transition effects either.

another thing to note is that between 1.05 and 1.27 the video becomes slightly muddled with use of the same clip being used at different times it makes look abit random.

it's a nice effort for your first video,I hope you stick with it. the only way is up.

thanx jinzo for your advices and kindness :)


p.s your new to amvhell alot of the members are high strung A** Holes, who wouldn't know constructive criticism if it was tied to a brick and smacked in to there faces.

Haha you are so right xD


especially when it's narutardnewfag #2432427593 showing off his SO DEEP AND EPIC LIKE MY SOUL AMV
Lol ..!
i wrote the word "epic" just to get the attraction :D

[Sir Fluffykins]

So wait, when I say it I'm being mean, but when Jinzo says it it's good advice?

:(

[Kaiju]

So wait, when I say it I'm being mean, but when Jinzo says it it's good advice?

:(

Jinzo speaks in newfag-ese, Fluffy. The New Guys understand his primitive language, yet cannot comprehend the high society proper etiquette language the most of us use. As it stands though, Jinzo is a proper example of a noble savage who cannot properly meld into such language and thus is a bridge between those newfagese and proper society.

[Shuiia]

Lol ..!
i wrote the word "epic" just to get the attraction :D

Don't.
Just don't ever do that again.

[jinzo64]

Jinzo speaks in newfag-ese, Fluffy. The New Guys understand his primitive language, yet cannot comprehend the high society proper etiquette language the most of us use. As it stands though, Jinzo is a proper example of a noble savage who cannot properly meld into such language and thus is a bridge between those newfagese and proper society.

I am the Avatar, the bridge between newfagese and proper society.

[Kaiju]

I am the Avatar, the bridge between newfagese and proper society.

More like a bilingual hispanic kid in the American Southwest.

[Shuiia]

Top kek

[jinzo64]

More like a bilingual hispanic kid in the American Southwest.

But I live in the northwest of England in a town called Barrow-In-Furness

p.s I am Da Avatar so
http://moesucks.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/haruhi_9-2.jpg?w=625

[Haar]

I thought you were Tarzan.


But... but... but you love me now.

I'll let you know after you play Jojo's Bizarre Adventure with me.


don't you do that with everyone?

Only 90% of them.