[Itachi Uchiha]

As you can see, I'm new here. Here are a selection of my AMVs that I have made so far, I'm pretty new to making them also.



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yAkjCMZLe_Y

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mc410N1f078

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v1Lr-OukhZs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_jfXHn2BX4U

[Sir Fluffykins]

1) Dramatic audio to the original japanese. I don't like this idea of trying to make a "cool trailer", but points for being the most consistant at telling a "story"
2) Metal Gear Solid audio is Kakashi...eh, if you're making a Kakashi/Solid Snake connection fine but I hated this one
3)Shattered to Naruto has been done a few time, but lets have a look at the editing...oh good, a random mess and then original japanese audio to try make it cool.
4) Hall of Fame to random fights...I kinda see how this could have worked but it doesn't here, it' too broken up and random. Maybe if you'd used Minato's story and used the faces on the fountain as the hall of fame, or Kakashi and the names on the grave stone...

[Itachi Uchiha]

1) Dramatic audio to the original japanese. I don't like this idea of trying to make a "cool trailer", but points for being the most consistant at telling a "story"
2) Metal Gear Solid audio is Kakashi...eh, if you're making a Kakashi/Solid Snake connection fine but I hated this one
3)Shattered to Naruto has been done a few time, but lets have a look at the editing...oh good, a random mess and then original japanese audio to try make it cool.
4) Hall of Fame to random fights...I kinda see how this could have worked but it doesn't here, it' too broken up and random. Maybe if you'd used Minato's story and used the faces on the fountain as the hall of fame, or Kakashi and the names on the grave stone...

1. I see, sometimes I don't like adding songs with lyrics on.
2. Not making a connection, just liked the music.
3. What's this about the Japanese audio?
4. I just wanted to make a general amv about people who have done something noteworthy of in Naruto

[PrinnyCat]

First video: music was alright, the flashes were not. They were really off putting and out of synce with the music. Maybe fades would have served a better purpose.
Second video: Again with the flashes when there should be fades or something less jarring to the eye. Also, no real story to it that is easy to tell. Some scenes seemed random.
Third video: Really random. I think should have just stuck with one person, as constantly switching just gets confusing and removes the emotional aspect of the song.
Fourth video: More random. Just putting it to fight scenes doesn't work at all. Here's how to do it properly, take notes:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s60QTo7gAMA&list=FLsczZEeAhgfxlajGYatL1RQ&index=76

[Guthix]

father and son , you have no ****ing idea what you were doing with this amv, half of the scenes used are useless, a typical scene mashup with useless effects [i mean seriously each new scene has the same god dam close up]telling the "story" with jap audio and subs just tells how much creativity you lack. also i swear i can hear a sound boost at 1:45.
and you didnt add theyr meeting scene? realy?

kakashi.teen>kid>teen again?>adult: age consistency, its a thing. 90% badass then suddenly he looks like he will piss his pants and then a mean look. give me one good reason why that was a good idea? again with the same monotonic ****ing effects. are you trying to give me seizure or something?i have no idea what are you trying to say with this video.

shatered. it went to **** after 0:25 im not even going to say why. you SHOULD know why.

i gave up on the 4rth.

when making an amv you have to ask:
what i am telling, how do i tell it without making the watcher die from boredom.
why others should care to watch it.
does this **** make sense? does it have to make sense?
what effects will will make my point or the vissuals stronger [for reference i advize not watching random youtube faggotry amvs]
and finaly, i suggest you read some tutorials first and then make amvs not the other way around.
these amvs are so **** all your excuses will be ignored.

[Guthix]

First video: music was alright, the flashes were not. They were really off putting and out of synce with the music. Maybe fades would have served a better purpose.
Second video: Again with the flashes when there should be fades or something less jarring to the eye. Also, no real story to it that is easy to tell. Some scenes seemed random.
Third video: Really random. I think should have just stuck with one person, as constantly switching just gets confusing and removes the emotional aspect of the song.
Fourth video: More random. Just putting it to fight scenes doesn't work at all. Here's how to do it properly, take notes:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s60QTo7gAMA&list=FLsczZEeAhgfxlajGYatL1RQ&index=76

should he takes notes how to stretch the screen to distort the view? what kind of **** are you watching?

[PrinnyCat]

should he takes notes how to stretch the screen to distort the view? what kind of **** are you watching?
Mainly the choices of scenes matched the song better. Anyway, was better than his attempt at using this song

[Hakiyara]

Guthix is passing judgement