YukiAnimeMusicVideo
07-10-2014, 09:31 PM
Enjoy :D


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BALUYDQtJs

izumiyagami
07-10-2014, 09:33 PM
mad, should we have a test for all members to teach about making threads?

PrinnyCat
07-10-2014, 09:53 PM
Started off okay, but then the text appeared. 'I hate U' might be good for text speak, but in an AMV its a big turn-off. Proper spelling and grammer goes a long way
I can grasp what the story you are trying to tell is, but some scenes could do with some text like at the start, such as when Yuzuru and Yuri are together, as it just looks odd with how you are trying to show them connecting (I guess?) and their lips are flapping, but they could be saying anything
Then it gets confusing with the sudden appearence of Ayato and Yuri being beaten up (again need text for the Japanese, as have little idea as to what is going on)
Yui (pink hair) is also suddenly a love rival?
Randomly Angel is underground with no explanation (and no explanation still for the Yuri scene)
Overall, I can sort of get what you are trying to do, but in the end it just falls flat. Need to work more on the story itself and prevent plot holes from appearing. The sync however was good, and the quality of the anime was a lot better than what we usually get on here with 'look at my AMV' etc

MADEVIL
07-10-2014, 09:54 PM
mad, should we have a test for all members to teach about making threads?

Issues are being discussed and this thread has at least been moved to the proper section of the site for now. In the mean time there is always this video that Chaz and Matt are working on.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9X-GXSb9-Y

MADEVIL
07-10-2014, 10:12 PM
Good day newbie,

Here is an educational video for you so that your next online woopsies are avoided.

The Chaz and Matt does a better job and relates more

Shuiia
07-10-2014, 11:00 PM
The Chaz and Matt does a better job and relates more

I know, by the time I posted you and prinny ninja'd me. I'll remove it now.