[ackondro]

I finished my first AMV, it is for a class, and I was only able to put three days in so far. Please look it over and tell me what could be changed/upgraded.
I know the quality is bad, I didn't have time to get enough DVD's.
I will be adding credits 10-9, but I don't have time now.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBTrIxXCWEw
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8740610262466217470&hl=en
Please be nice.

[zustin662]

lol 1/10

[Inkwolf]

Please be nice.


I didn't watch it all the way through 'cause I'm on dial-up, and ran out of patiece waiting for it to load.

But if I were you, i would lose that whole fake-beginning-uploading-new-video thing, which only takes up time without being particularly original or funny. The 'day in the life' section--what I saw of it--seemed fine, but that intro is a snore.

[Aleciel]

I'm not going to be as critical as both of these before me, All i can say is, You sync it all together pretty well, keeping your lines with the changing of scenes. As well as syncing with the characters mouths. While the voice quality was under there, if you could fix that things would be easier to understand. Maybe you could add some backround elevator music or such, that would be a nice little tune to keep interest in what your saying.

I think you did pretty well for your very first that is. If you can improve from here, you've had a good start.

[ackondro]

Thanks those comments really came in handy. I took out the fake beginning and added some music from Trigun during the voice part. Unfortunately, the voice section was already corrected as much as my software and skills could make it. Also, this was very rushed, I would usually take two weeks or more, but the assignment forced my hand. Anyway, Thanks and hope to see you again.