N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 06:15 AM
In honor of the recently released special and my damn boredom due to not being able to go the hell to sleep, i decided to go through my written works archive and pull out some song parody lyrics i wrote 3 years back as a joke. Basically, me and my friends made a strange observation that Goku and Vegeta's relationship has similarities to the song "Stan" by Eminem so i one day took a crack at writing lyrics for a prodyand here it is. Feel free to tell me if you like it, hate it, or i have too much free time on my hands (not far from the truth)

P.S. Please feel free to suggest changes to it to make it better as it's been a year since i edited it and my english teacher always says writing can be improved.

P.P.S. If anyone is interested i always wanted to enlist some help dubbing this to an instrumental of "Stan."

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My blood runs cold I'm wondering why I got out of bed at all
The Dragon Balls glow out my window, and I can see them fall
as glaring lights flash through my fingers leave your bloodstain on my wall
It reminds me that of what I had what I had...

Greetings Kakarot, I called you out yet you still haven't accepted

I left my tail, my blood, and my footprint on your doorstep.

I blasted two shots at your garden. You must not have saw them.

There must of been a problem with my aim in all or something.

Sometimes, I fire blast too wildly when I'm releasing them.

But anyway, screw it! What's been going on with your Grandfather?

My wife is pregnant and I'm about to have a daughter

When I have a daughter guess what I’ll call her?

I shall call her "Bra.” I heard about your friend Krillin too but hardly.

I had a friend who “got himself killed" cause he was weak

and nick was "baldie". Look, I know you hear this every

year, but I'm your greatest rival. I even got some of the uncut stuff

you did with Tao. I got a room full of your bodies and your pierced

in heart. I enjoy the stuff you did with Broly too the second part.

Anyway, I hope you get this soon.

Hit me back! Just attack! You know what I'm saying?

Vegeta – “The Prince of All Saiyans”


My blood runs cold I'm wondering why I can't get out of bed at all
The Dragon Balls glow out my window, and I can see them fall
as glaring lights flash through my fingers leave your bloodstain on
my wall
It reminds me that of what I had what I had...

Greetings Kakarot! You still haven't agreed to my challenge! Am I

mad? No! I knew you wouldn't manage...If you wanted out of the

world tournament you could have just punked...But at least you could

have written up a challenge for trunks. That's my little Saiyan son.

He's only 8 years old! We waited to the 100th episode for you for 3

seasons yet you didn't show! That's rather crappy since you’re now

his greatest rival. The really sad part is he wants to beat you more

than I do. Again, I'm not that mad but I don't like being lied to.

Remember when we met on Namek? You said if I fought you, you

would fight back! See? I'm just like you in a way. I never knew my

father neither. Only that his name was "Vegeta." I can relate when

we partake in many epic brawls so when I have a peaceful day I

train at night until the dawn because I don't really have much else so it

really helps when I get stressed. I even have your name written in

blood across my chest. Sometimes, I even punch myself, just to feel

the PAIN to remind me of the days when you would punch me in

the FACE! See? Every fight you have's a thrill and I hate because you

joke it. My wife is jealous because she knows I talk about you a lot

but she doesn't know you close to how I know you Kakarot! She

doesn't know how it was like for Saiyans like us growing up!

Challenge me soon hack or I'll be the last rival you ever fuse.

Duel me soon!

"Vegeta"

As a matter of fact, WE SHALL FUSE TOGETHER TOO!


My blood runs cold I'm wondering why I can't get out of bed at all
The Dragon Balls glow out my window, and I can see them fall
as glaring lights flash through my fingers leave your bloodstain on
my wall
It reminds me that of what I had what I had...

Greetings Master I'm -Too -Good -To- Challenge –And- Fight -My -Rivals.

This shall be the last time I ever pull a revival! Its been 3 years and

still no fight. I’M NOT WORTHY OF IT!? I know you got my last 5 threats.

I wrote my blood on them perfect! So thus my saga ends Kakarot, I

hope you see it. I'm in the sky right now. I'm going OVER 9,0000 at

the speed of light. Hey! Kakarot, I stole a bunch of senzu beans;

YOU DARE ME TO FLY!? You now that song with Dirty Vegas and the

Days Go By where the guy could of stopped that other guy from

dancing, but didn't, and the humans started to mock him in the

street the next minute? That's kind of how this is, you could have stopped me from

being crushed. Now it's too late. I'm on my last Bean

and now I'm dazed. And all I wanted was one lousy SCUFFLE or a

BRAWL. BE SURE TO KNOW I WISHED UP ALL THOSE CURSED DRAGON

BALLS! I HATE YOU KAKAROT! This would've been epic. THINK ABOUT IT!

YOU WRECKED IT NOW! I HOPE YOU CAN’T EAT AND YOU STARVE ABOUT

IT! THEN WHEN YOU EAT I HOPE YOU VOMIT WHEN YOU SLEEP RIGHT

ON IT! I HOPE YOUR GUT FILLS UP FOR ONCE YET I CAN ONLY DREAM ABOUT IT!

See Kakarot...

*Struggles for breath*

SHUT UP WOMAN! I’M TRYING TO TALK! Yes Kakarot...I'm holding Bulma

by the throat. Yet I didn't blow her up I just beat her up. See? I’M

NOT LIKE YOU! Because once I let her go we know she'll hit the ground and then she'll splatter too!

Well...Farewell! I'm about to hit Capsule Corp now…

Wait a second...CURSES! I FORGOT TO WISH THIS OUT!

*Tries to stop*

*Crashes Into Building*


*Building Collapses*



My blood runs cold I'm wondering why I can't get out of bed at all
The Dragon Balls glow out my window, and I can see them fall
as glaring lights flash through my fingers leave your bloodstain on my wall
It reminds me that of what I had what I had...


Dear Vegeta, I wanted to fight you sooner, but I was dead. You

said your wife is pregnant now...oh wait! when did you wed?

Look, I'm really frightened you would call your daughter that and

here's a challenge just for Trunks, I wrote it on his Dragon Map. I'm

sorry about the world tournament I know I missed you, don't think I

did all that intentionally just to fist you, but what's this about you

said "you like to swing your fist to"? That's just disturbing Vegeta,

come on! How demented are you? You have some problems Vegeta.

I think you need some help...So the next time you train, you don't

end up killing yourself. And what's this crap about us going to fuse

together? That's the type of thing that would make me not want us

to fight each other. I really think you and Bulma need each other.

You two are the perfect match. I hope you get to read

this Olive Branch. I just hope it reaches you in time before you hurt

someone. I bet you would have some fun if you chilled out a little.

I'm glad I motivate you but Vegeta, what's so wrong? Know this all

along that I was looking forward to our brawl.

I just didn't want you to do something insane. I saw something on

the news a couple weeks ago that caused me pain. Some crazy alien flew

into Capsule Corporation holding his wife by the throat and she was

pregnant with his Saiyan! In the rubble they found a tape and they said

who it was to.

Come to think about it...it....it wasn't addressed "Goku"

...Darn

jeremyhac
08-06-2011, 12:19 PM
lol nice. Seems like you put a lot of effort into making this.

Zetsubou-Chan
08-06-2011, 12:51 PM
Someone make dub of this now

N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 06:43 PM
Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.

LOLWTFBBQ
08-06-2011, 07:15 PM
****ing love 3min3m, this is pretty damn awesome

jinzo64
08-06-2011, 10:12 PM
in my opinion it improves on the origional song.

LawRayLiet
08-06-2011, 10:38 PM
Wow N.P.C.C., I'm extremely impressed.

I read along to the instrumental and this is great.
There are a few parts that could stand to be rephrased a bit, to fit better within the allotted time in between the beat, at certain parts during the song.
But the idea behind each and every lyric is genius.

I'll probably post in a little bit some recommended changes.
But seriously, I am very impressed.

I'd loved to see this dubbed as well.

Ruby150
08-06-2011, 11:04 PM
Someone make dub of this now

Maybe TeamFourStar would, if someone sent them the lyrics

N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 11:19 PM
Maybe TeamFourStar would, if someone sent them the lyrics

I contemplated doing that for a long time but always said "Nah, not today."

Ruby150
08-06-2011, 11:21 PM
... Well, ad the old saying goes: "No time like the present."

N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 11:35 PM
But the problem is it's not quite "perfect" yet to send it to them. I always go off a couple of times when going along with the instrumental as LawRayLiet pointed out. I'm interested to see what he has in mind.

Ruby150
08-06-2011, 11:37 PM
It'll be interesting if they'd be willing to do it, because then you'll have a dubbing, and a video to go with it.

N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 11:42 PM
Yeah, that would awesome.

Ruby150
08-06-2011, 11:43 PM
I know, that's why someone should ask them, when you're done (I could, if you want)

N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 11:46 PM
I know, that's why someone should ask them, when you're done (I could, if you want)

Go ahead...I'm lazy as hell and may never get to it anyway.

Ruby150
08-06-2011, 11:49 PM
Lol, well just send me a message when it's done, and I'll ask them

N.P.C.C.
08-06-2011, 11:55 PM
Ok, on the chance they say "no" it's not like we can't go for it ourselves.

N.P.C.C.
08-13-2011, 07:42 AM
I made little changes if anyone is interested. I still am open to suggestions also.